Friday, September 15, 2006

A pOeTiC TuNe tO mAh FeEliNgs

I’m in this world,
Where my fingers know
More than my mind
My heart, a vivid watcher

My imaginations,
My feelings
My desires
Take the full throttle front seat

It’s this feeling that keeps me,
Little of the sane I am
Or else what else cld have motivated me
Of all people to design a small part
Of winter collection for a show

If it weren’t for this feeling,
I wouldn’t have got an A grade
In the language in writing in

If it weren’t for this feeling,
I wouldn’t have got such great friends
To my credit

If it weren’t for this feeling,
I wouldn’t have danced the right leg
To the right tune
To win the dance prize

If it weren’t for this feeling,
I wouldn’t have done half the things
I’m getting credit for

If it weren’t for this feeling
I wouldn’t be me ....

11 comments:

Ms. Lane said...

daamn cool gurl..keep the feeling going on strong. u rock!!!!

Arvind said...

Nice sense of rhythm...

You could name the poem 'If it weren't for my feelings'..

I can see you're obsessed with the 'ME'!! Lol...
A phase huh??

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

@rinz:hehe trying to keep it goin ...only thing thts keeping me sane n same for my exams !

@arvind:hehe thnx n yeah kinda am in this everything is abt me mood ..hehe so everyone bug off

mach4_dude said...

hey gr8 poems.......in my words junkies lol........u r so much ahead of me !!!
u rock !

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

oh im in no way ahead of u da ...we jus have diff kinda writin styles
n yeah u too rock !

Da Rodent said...

Hmm... lady., some self-ruminations huh? Cool :)

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

hehe righto

mach4_dude said...

hey hw u put dat background pic?? temme na.....com on i jus ryt junkies which r basically 4 d junk :) i aint got any sense of rym or rythm....

Janhavi said...

wowwwiiieee!! amazing work woman!!! keep the gr8 work goin!!!

Janhavi said...

lol n i loveeeeee ur bg!!!! :-D

Manasa. K .Kumar said...

teehee thunk u....grt to have ya back bloggin